When I'm not playing games....

A few bits were ok but the whole thing was a bit manufactured and cliched i.e. it didn't sound like a track you'd hear in a club. What I mean by that is it was a bit 'take out instruments..gradually reintroduce instruments..fade sound out...fade sound back in and intriduce climactic beat...'

I don't think the snares/hi hats (whatever they are) helped either.

Just trying to be constructive.

Best bit was 2:07 to 2:22. That was the only part that I thought sounded authentic and viable.
 
A few bits were ok but the whole thing was a bit manufactured and cliched i.e. it didn't sound like a track you'd hear in a club. What I mean by that is it was a bit 'take out instruments..gradually reintroduce instruments..fade sound out...fade sound back in and intriduce climactic beat...'

I don't think the snares/hi hats (whatever they are) helped either.

Just trying to be constructive.

Best bit was 2:07 to 2:22. That was the only part that I thought sounded authentic and viable.

Smashes at raves tho...


Thanks, i'll keep this in mind though in the future ^^
 
Hard work it is.

I took a 6 week Music Production course the beginning of this year... Definitely not my thing. I didn't go back for the following courses.

I respect people who do it though because it takes a lot of dedication.
 
Thanks man. Yeah it's tough, still crafting but I have some other stuff coming as well. I just thought I'd share. I did go to school, took the beginners class, learned everything else on my own. I need to get my home studio setup properly though. I've been delaying that for a while.