Is anyone really good at writing resumes and cover letters ?

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I'm wanting to do a career change to get into the mines, and I need a really good Resume and cover letter to get my foot in the door.

I was wondering would anyone be willing to look at my resume and make some small fixes to it and maybe my cover letter as well. The hardest thing for me is getting the Interview, I know if I can get to this stage, I have a really good chance to get in.

I have made a fair few changes to my resume in the last year, but it''s not working for me, so anyone really skilled and talented in this sort of thing ?
 
Send the text to me in a private message. I'll send some advice... I'm no expert but handle the hiring process for my company sometimes.
 
Keep it clean, keep it concise, 1 and half pages at most and most of all, come to the point quickly and easily, where the interviewer can see it in like...1 second.

That's the biggest tip I can give you without knowing the specifics.....I'm so farking tired of reading a 5 page story book! I get those, it instantly goes into the circular file no matter how qualified the candidates mayb.
 
K.I.S.S. (keep it simple stupid)

remember, quality, not quantity

also, don't be one of those "references available upon request people" -- include at least 3 (last employer, another professional reference and a personal reference)

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My personal tips based on nine months of job searching/applying immediately after graduating college:

1. Re-write resume to each job you apply for. This can be daunting and time consuming, but if you're applying for a job that has specific requirements in the job description, you best make sure those same exact descriptions are in your resume for your past experience.

2. Don't focus on what your hard copy resume looks like, this will rarely get handed out, instead focus on a plain text resume that can easily be submitted electronically. If you're emailing it to a human, a nice PDF with limited styling will work.

3. Key words, make sure your job experience has the SAME keywords as the description for the job you're applying to has. You may think your past job was "X" "Y" "Z" for your duties, projects, etc, but the job you're applying for may say "A" "B" "C", make sure yours says the same. Key words are what these third-party job application programs search for when they scan resumes, you want yours to come up in the results.

4. Limited styling. Bullets, underlines, bolding, font size, etc should all be clean and limited. I limit myself to a one page resume. Eventually after I gain 10 years of experience, I can move on to a two page, but in my opinion, if you're under 10 years, limited yourself to one page.

5. Objective. Throw it out, not needed.

6. Skills. List the skills you have and list the SAME exact ones in the description of the job you're applying for. Example: I know Photoshop, InDesign, Illustrator, and they're all part of the Adobe Creative Suite. I can't just get by by saying "Adobe Creative Suite". Instead, I write it like this: Adobe Creative Suite 6 (whichever the latest version is), Photoshop, Illustrator, InDesign. If the job is saying it wants photoshop skill, better say photoshop and not just Adobe Creative Suite, the job app program won't know what Adobe Creative Suite is.

7. Create different versions of your resume and save them with different file names like, JohnSmithResume, JohnSmithResume v2, JohnSmithResume v3., etc. I do this personally so I know what my original one is and then the v2, v3 etc are modified versions based on jobs I've applied for.

8. Never lie on your resume. This is absolutely true, however, it doesn't hurt you to say you know HTML even if you don't know HTML. For all you know, they may want someone that has the ability to learn HTML rather than a seasoned pro in HTML. It just depends, but tread carefully on saying you did something at a past job or that you were "CEO" of some company when you weren't.

9. Personal website. It doesn't hurt to have a personal blog/site that lists your experience and has a downloadable link to your resume. Also depending on the industry you're going into, it helps you to have an opinion on the industry. Perhaps posting articles, posting projects, etc. Anything that you can do to showcase your experience further beyond the resume. blogger.com is a great start, it's free and easy.

10. Instead of listing duties on your resume, try to showcase projects you completed and what the results of them were. For example, I created an advertising campaign for my college that resulted in increased traffic to the website where students were directed to from the ad. That was one of the goals of the campaign, to increase traffic, and it worked.

I think that's enough for now, if you have any other questions, feel free to ask me.


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On cover letters, unless they request it, don't waste your time writing them. If you're emailing your resume to someone, it doesn't hurt to write a few sentences introducing yourself and saying why you would like to have an opportunity to speak further about the position and the company.

The greatest strategy for job searching and applying is to not waste time. You can waste so much time and it will stress you out like no other. As an experiment, next time you are applying online for a job, try timing yourself and do it for several applications and compare how much time you spend applying for just one job.

Sometimes a single job app can take over 45 minutes, especially if you factor in re-writing your resume, and filling out all the forms, etc.
 
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those are all excellent tips Vapor and ones that I followed closely until landing my "career job"
 
those are all excellent tips Vapor and ones that I followed closely until landing my "career job"

Thanks! It was a stressful nine months of searching for employment post-college. I had five different companies interview me and I went as far as the second round interviews where it came between me and another, and experience won over me. Luckily I got hired at a small pvt company and was able to gain experience for two years and move on to bigger and better things.

College doesn't prepare you very well for the job search, and people currently in the industry who are say...mid-level and higher, seem to have no idea how difficult it is to job search. Everything is done electronically via online job apps and the days of handing your resume and even emailing it directly to someone, are over.
 
I had a class in high school that forced us to make a resume and encouraged us to keep it up to date -- any resume I have has some roots to that original assignment. I definitely agree about crafting your resume for the job you're applying for.. in my case especially I was applying for computer/technical positions with limited actual experience so it was important for me to highlight the areas of other jobs, skills, etc that matched the job.
 
I had a class in high school that forced us to make a resume and encouraged us to keep it up to date -- any resume I have has some roots to that original assignment. I definitely agree about crafting your resume for the job you're applying for.. in my case especially I was applying for computer/technical positions with limited actual experience so it was important for me to highlight the areas of other jobs, skills, etc that matched the job.
I had a class like this in college. It was mandatory, but probably worth it anyway.
 
I agree that it's definitely not easy to find the job you're looking for after you're done with a college. I've done that before and, boy, wasn't too easy to find job for my major. After one or two years of searching, I ended up landing at Amazon.com and loved it ever since. Although it has nothing to do with the job I'm looking for (graphic design), I love Amazon.com so much that I'm planning to stay there for a long, long time.

But yeah, finding a job is a pain in the butts, nowadays.
 
I actually was rather lucky and had a good paying job in my field lined up before I even graduated. Through my experience though, I know one that is definitely true: it's all about who you know.
 
My friend applied for roughly 40 jobs and got no interviews. He gave his cv to me, I rewrote and restructured it. He applied for 4 jobs, got 2 interviews and now sells property in Dubai on those palm tree islands.

Not that I'm bragging or anything.
 
I'm 15 years into my professional career and haven't created a resume since I was a teenager looking for s*** part time work.

My tip: Be awesome.
Making a resume when you were a teenager? What kind of part time work were you looking for as a teenager?!
 
Making a resume when you were a teenager? What kind of part time work were you looking for as a teenager?!

I had a few jobs as a teenager.. 2 of them were just retail jobs. Both I was offered right away after showing up with a resume and asking to speak with a manager, I was 18 and 19 respectively. Most people don't bring resumes to apply for jobs like that, and most people get turned down for jobs a lot, I didn't.

I had some decent s*** to throw on a resume at that age though.. I'd done some technology work when I was 15-17 that I was sort of taking a break from.. I had scholastic awards and s*** as well.
 
I had a few jobs as a teenager.. 2 of them were just retail jobs. Both I was offered right away after showing up with a resume and asking to speak with a manager, I was 18 and 19 respectively. Most people don't bring resumes to apply for jobs like that, and most people get turned down for jobs a lot, I didn't.

I had some decent s*** to throw on a resume at that age though.. I'd done some technology work when I was 15-17 that I was sort of taking a break from.. I had scholastic awards and s*** as well.
Hmm, interesting. I didn't even know it was a thing that teenagers bring resumes when looking for jobs. But like you said, it seems a lot of them don't. I wouldn't know, I didn't work a day in my life until I started college and started working part-time for an IT company.
 
I'm 15 years into my professional career and haven't created a resume since I was a teenager looking for s*** part time work.

My tip: Be awesome.

Please don't take this the wrong way, but that's the dumbest advice I've ever heard of. Be awesome? I think it's a bit more than that.

You can go into an interview and be the most awesome amazing person ever...they will not care how "awesome" you are, they care do you have the ability to perform the job, can you convince them that you have the ability to perform the job? If your resume says you've got 3 years experience, and they're really looking for five...and there's a second candidate with the five...your awesomeness isn't going to be the deciding factor.

When you don't have the experience, it's tougher to sell yourself, but the most important thing in my opinion is to show drive and passion during an interview.
 
Please don't take this the wrong way, but that's the dumbest advice I've ever heard of. Be awesome? I think it's a bit more than that.

You can go into an interview and be the most awesome amazing person ever...they will not care how "awesome" you are, they care do you have the ability to perform the job, can you convince them that you have the ability to perform the job? If your resume says you've got 3 years experience, and they're really looking for five...and there's a second candidate with the five...your awesomeness isn't going to be the deciding factor.

When you don't have the experience, it's tougher to sell yourself, but the most important thing in my opinion is to show drive and passion during an interview.
I don't think you're capturing the essence of what being awesome is.

When you get into an interview, you need to kick down the door and shout "OH YEAH" like you're a giant pitcher of job qualification Kool-Aid. Forget the 'job requirements'.
 
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@Vapor : So your advice is to not be awesome?

;)

That post was rather tongue in cheek.. but seriously, if you TRULY apply yourself you can get jobs without applying for them. Excel at school and your profs are far more likely to help you find a job.. excel at a low level position or when working with customers and you are more likely to get recruited for more work, etc.

Obviously I don't mean to say don't create a great resume.. I was just being facetious and fake bragging.
 
Please don't take this the wrong way, but that's the dumbest advice I've ever heard of. Be awesome? I think it's a bit more than that.

You can go into an interview and be the most awesome amazing person ever...they will not care how "awesome" you are, they care do you have the ability to perform the job, can you convince them that you have the ability to perform the job? If your resume says you've got 3 years experience, and they're really looking for five...and there's a second candidate with the five...your awesomeness isn't going to be the deciding factor.

When you don't have the experience, it's tougher to sell yourself, but the most important thing in my opinion is to show drive and passion during an interview.

Well said. "Being awesome" don't mean a thing to a company.
 
@Vapor : So your advice is to not be awesome?

;)

That post was rather tongue in cheek.. but seriously, if you TRULY apply yourself you can get jobs without applying for them. Excel at school and your profs are far more likely to help you find a job.. excel at a low level position or when working with customers and you are more likely to get recruited for more work, etc .

Easier to say than done. :cool: I know several of my friends work hard and 100% devoted themselves to improve their skills or whatever their goal was and still unable to find the job. I believe it's all about who you know and a bit of luck to get into the jobs. We have to keep in mind that there are at least 300+ million people in USA alone and finding a job can be a pain nowadays. :( I've seen some people tried to turn their hobbies into "store" and try to sell to make money for the living. It can work that way but won't be easy to begin with.
 
Easier to say than done. :cool: I know several of my friends work hard and 100% devoted themselves to improve their skills or whatever their goal was and still unable to find the job. I believe it's all about who you know and a bit of luck to get into the jobs. We have to keep in mind that there are at least 300+ million people in USA alone and finding a job can be a pain nowadays. :( I've seen some people tried to turn their hobbies into "store" and try to sell to make money for the living. It can work that way but won't be easy to begin with.

As you progress through you career and reach the 10 yr mark, a lot of your future opportunities will usually come from people you know and your network. I've joined a local professional organization for graphic design and design in general, and while some of the events are cool, it's nothing more than clique so to speak with the board of directors.

Joining professional organizations can be a hit or miss, it can become expensive with yearly dues and event dues, so I suggest choosing wisely as you can join many organizations but really only one or two are beneficial to your career.

I'd love to open up my own hockey pro shop, but I know it won't be a money maker for what I want to do with my life. Some people are content with free-lancing their graphic design capabilities and some (myself) would rather work for a company that's got great benefits and job security.

I've read so many discussions on Linkedin from so-called 20+ year pros in the industry and their job advice is crap. They have no earthly clue what it's like to be unemployed and search for a job. In my opinion, the best people to talk to are the five and under career people, they are the most recent and know today's job market hiring process and it's not fun at all.
 
You want to get INTO the mines? It's like October Sky in reverse.

Also, clearly I have no worthwhile advice.
 
You want to get INTO the mines? It's like October Sky in reverse.

Also, clearly I have no worthwhile advice.
Thanks for the replies guys, yeah I do :)

Well I've been applying for some other work in the mean time (as the mines is really hard to get your foot into) and I got a Interview tomorrow. So I am going to show them how Awesome I am :).
 
So I am going to show them how Awesome I am :).

Walk into the interview, slam your resume down on the table, and walk out. This will show them how awesome you are. They'll be speechless.